Baby are you from another Planet?

This cheesey song is a product of an ovedose of romantic comedies. Written a month ago, I think. Initially I decided not to put it on public display. But I think any thing is not too ridiculous when it comes to riddhi!!
Another Riddhiculous Post. Enjoy.. Yeah yeah Laugh if u wish.

Baby, are you from another planet?

It’s weird, the way you make me feel
It feels like a movie reel
It is just too good to be true
Why can’t you give me a reason to argue?
You say, “Hope it lasts, the love we beget”
Baby, are you from another planet?

No fancy looks, no fancy name
You are extraordinary, me just a simple dame
Too much of sweetness makes me feel strange
Didn’t you say I don’t have to change?
You say, “Just cherish every moment”
Baby, are you from another planet?

Look, what have you done to me
Holding hands, roses, this can’t be me
I mean, these are things I completely abhor
Does it need be more?
You say, “Don’t spoil it, it is perfect”
Baby, are you from another planet?

I am loud, I babble, do crazy stuff
Rotten humour, too much of myself
You simply don’t like it, really don’t approve
Do you want something better to reproof?
You say, “We were never meant to be met”
Baby, are you from another planet?

For the first time though, you understand
As I willingly accept not reprimand
Last day together, I am loving it, at last
Won’t this make a fascinating past?
You say, “Honestly, let us celebrate”
Baby, are you from another planet?

You don’t understand words, don’t you get the signs
Very next morning you find reasons to join
God, I talk so much, wish I also had a ‘voice’
Don’t I have a choice?
You say, “Men are from mars and…”
Hush… I knew it, depart to your damn planet!

I wanted someone different, not aliens, to confess
It took me 30 lines to express,
To express “it is tough”

While, you are stuck on your six odd lines of love
By the way, even they are not yours
I gave them words
Find a new planet, go ruin others’ verse.

11 Comments

  1. Haha! Wonderful! You made me smile, thanks for that.

    You see, I've told several aspiring lyricists that sometimes it is so tough to write something simple with a pinch of comedy in it. This poem/song is something like my point.

    Love the structure, adore the lines because it delivers the message without really being immensely intense. It is light and easy to digest.

    It is not Jim Carey's comedy, it is more of Hugh Grant's comedy which still makes your eye twinkle.

    Keep experimenting! Well done!!!

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  2. this is so not your types. But i like it…and i really like the structure…the last line is damn nice… dont know about this baby..but what planet are you from!! :)accha hai ..your overdosed romantic song:)

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  3. u call it ridiculous?? plz take ur words back 😀
    i loved it to the T..
    awesome!! *the grin widens*

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  4. @Brose- You are welcome. Thank you so muh for liking it. You don''t know how much this means to me.thanks super duper..
    @Mehak- yeah not expected out of me.. but whatever actually it describes myself in a better way.
    @Richh– hehe lets call it riddhiculous.. coz come on u agree the reason behind the widening grin is that..:)

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  5. hohoho…you're makin me be santa. nice thought, lovely expression. i can imagine hugh grant singing this out with all the pelvis thrusts in the right places. 🙂

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  6. i can't imagine you actually published it :P…when i asked you to do so you almost threatened to sue me :D…always told you this "baby" rocks

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  7. lol…d endin takes d cake…unexpected considerin d song was too romantic(note i din say "cheesy" :D)
    n seriously do ppl really use words like "beget"?!?!?! (isnt dat gud enuf reason 2 dump someone!)
    ps: thanx a ton 4 followin me…u got a follower in d bargain 😉

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  8. U noe i sort of feel that this would make a great song… I like the lyrics a lot… however cheesy u may call them… I'm all for cheesy 🙂

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  9. Funny song. I just wish I can hear the tune. LOL!

    I would disagree with Ajey, maybe Adam Sandler could sing this one, no disrespect mate.

    Z

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  10. @nidhi- thank u santa 🙂

    @soubhik- lolz i thought chalo let me have some fun.. hehe I had nothing else to put.. experimental cinema se inspire type hogayi..

    @blunt edges- haha cheesey it is for sure. u should have said it

    @Nim- hehe yeah this is a song.. thats the logic.. like comeon who said i have problems with being cheezee..:P Hail cheesiness..

    @Zorlone- thank u thnak u thank u so much for liking it..

    about giving it the music. I am not half as creative as ajey. he knows the best.. He can try giving it some music for that matter.. I will be more than happy.

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  11. Riddhi..
    I have read this one the very first day..
    This one will make a superb song..
    Riddhi, from now on you don't have the right to process slowly..

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